Wednesday 17 November 2010

The boy in the big old house by YUNHI


Hi everybody I want to tell you about my GHOST STORY.It title THE BOY IN THE BIG OLD HOUSE.One day the boy's name JACK was going picnic with his friends at the beach.about 10 o'clock at night he was went to the beach alone and his friends were in the hotel they were sleeping.

JACK was going alone to the beach he walked away from the beach suddenly he saw a big house and he was get into the big house.when he went to the big house he saw a lot of old pictures and was dirty It maybe the old house and when he walked in the old house it was scary.He saw a lot of foot print and he followed the foot print.when he followed the print the saw the blood on the floor.

JACK was shouting he walked continue he saw a lot of knifes and he saw a girl was crying and then JACK was going near the girl and then her face was ugly and have blood on her face and she has fang.she was smiling to JACK,but JACK was scary he asked the girl"Who are you?"and the girl answered"I'm a GHOST"JACK was run very fast he ran to the hotel and the GHOST was followed him the GHOST said"good luck JACK"and she comeback to the old house.when JACK went to hotel he was sleeping,but he was scary.In the morning he leave from the hotel to his house and he was going to school he was tell the story that he went to the big old house to his classmates they was very scared.they think It the scary GHOST STORY.
Written by YUNHI.

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